Hemmingway Piece
By: Alecia Christiano
The author was depicting the situation well. The conversations flowed well and kept my interest. This was intended for anyone. It was a sad family situation, which was somewhat suspenseful. I would recommend that she proofread and spellcheck before submitting the document. I caught two very blatant typos. Overall, I thought it was enjoyable reading and I was anxious yet saddened to read the ending.
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